Music Video (Draft 3 Full Video)

This is my second full video completed draft that includes the changes suggested by my friends and peers. I now plan to ask my teacher for any final changes that she thinks I need to make before I present my final Music Video.

Music Video Changes

From my first draft of my music video there are a few changes that I am going to make to improve the media form overall since receiving feedback from my friends and peers. Some of the overlay shots near the end of my video were introduced to some of the shots too late making the video seem jumpy at certain points which can be seen in this short section of the video below that I have selected to highlight the error.

To correct the error in the video I need to make the overlay shots longer and move them backwards on the timeline so that they start earlier in that section of the video. As I have lengthened the time of the shot it wont effect the end of that section it will just start sooner and make my music video run smoother. Below are four print-screens of the corrections I have made to my music video with before and after shots.

First Edit correct
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Before

After

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Second Edit corrected

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Before

After

Friend And Peer Feedback

Paige -

Here is some feedback I received off a friend Via mobile phone text. 

Ellie - 

Chloe - 

Becky - 

Feedback Via Facebook, Social Networking site.

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From my feedback received I will now go on to watch my music video and highlight the section(s) of footage that has been suggested to be changed. I will then decide if the suggested changes are necessary and then I will go on to make the changes I feel are needed to improve my video for my third video drafting.