Becky - "There is not a lot to change in your music video as it is abstract and really works well. I really like the light aspect which I would incorporate a bit more on the scene were you are show the males hands. The mirror effect of the female is really nice and the graphic image at the start is really interesting too, relating well to the galactic theme of the video. At the end of the video were you are shown the candle being blown out I would incorporate the image again to incorporate the galaxy aspect again to finalise the piece. Overall it is very good and with those small additions it will finalise to be a very nice piece."
From my teachers feedback on my music video I plan to add an overlay of the light shot as she suggested over the shot of the male hands and also I will add the galaxy image I had taken and manipulated at the start and place it over my final shot of the candle with a low opacity so both can be seen.
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